Talk:Alexandra Kropotkin/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kavyansh.Singh (talk · contribs) 19:39, 22 January 2022 (UTC) Nominator: Czar (talk · contribs) at 00:45, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Prose

 * (1887–1966) — upto you, though I'll suggest to write full dates
 * The New York Times — can be linked in the lead, and the prose as well: The New York Times
 * I'd expect the full name, Alexandra Petrovna Kropotkin, in the lead as well
 * where Alexandra stayed until 1921, after the death of her father. She settled in New York. — Odd flow
 * championed her father's legacy — championed is WP:POV
 * and maintained connection with his circles — can we use another word than 'circles'?
 * By the 1964 United States presidential election — should be "In the 1964 United States presidential election"
 * the conservative Barry Goldwater — indeed he was the most conservative candidate, but I would also suggest to include that he was a Republican
 * While living in London, she had a — replace 'she' with her last name
 * relationship and brief affair — either 'relationship ' or a 'brief affair', but not both together
 * with author Somerset Maugham — our articles calls him "W. Somerset Maugham"

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