Talk:Alexis Bachelot/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Redtigerxyz (talk · contribs) 17:22, 21 December 2011 (UTC)


 * Comment Thanks for starting the review, this has been a fun article to work on. Thinking about Hawaii is a good way to get through the winter :) I tried to remove the paragraph-beginning pronouns, let me know if you see any that I missed. I should have a decent amount of time to spend on this over the rest of the week, so detailed feedback on the article is more than welcome. Mark Arsten (talk) 19:40, 21 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the detailed comments and copyediting, I think I took care of your comments--but I'll try to take another look in a couple days. Mark Arsten (talk) 00:51, 25 December 2011 (UTC)
 * My comments have been addressed. GA PASS. Congrats. Great job. Redtigerxyz  Talk 15:51, 25 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review, it was a pleasure to work with you. Mark Arsten (talk) 01:49, 26 December 2011 (UTC)