Talk:Alfons Grieder

Creation attempt history
I created this page about a well known figure in 20th century rudimental drumming to add to the body of knowledge represented in the rudimental percussion template. Not intended to promote or provide any non-neutral information. It got rejected for lack of citations (though I had more sources than many other biographical articles that have been accepted, but fair point... more citations are better).

I went back and dug deeper to add several more new sources, and a bit more detail, to verify the information and resubmitted. It got rejected again on the basis of unencyclopedic tone. Ok, fair point. I reworded or entirely removed a few sentences that, after consideration, could have been construed as non-neutral or promotional.

I have resubmitted a third version in the hopes that my recent edits have made the article neutral enough For acceptance. If not, I would appreciate assistance from another editor in reshaping the info into a better format. Everything is factual and sourced from the list of citations, and, although I have created many other pages about similarly important figures in rudimental drumming history, this particular page seems to be giving me trouble with other editors above all others. Ryukin (talk) 14:21, 5 September 2020 (UTC)