Talk:Algeciras campaign/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Thurgate (talk · contribs) 18:55, 9 May 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * prose:  (MoS):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * 2) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Comments
1. were ultimately completely exonerated. Suggest - were completely exonerated

2. Accompanying the squadron were the frigates Libre and the Spanish Sabina and the French lugger Vautour. Suggest - Accompanying the squadron were the frigates Libre, the Spanish Sabina and the French lugger Vautour.

3. blazing wrecks in the darkness. Suggest - blazing wrecks

4. The both exploded. Suggest - They both exploded

5. although Superb had lost just 15 men wounded. Suggest - whilst Superb had just 15 men wounded

I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow you to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns. Thurgate (talk) 18:57, 9 May 2012 (UTC)
 * All done, thanks for the review.--Jackyd101 (talk) 20:09, 9 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Passed. Good job Jacky. Thurgate (talk) 21:30, 9 May 2012 (UTC)