Talk:Ali Abu Nuwar/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:02, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:02, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

No copyvio/dablink/external link issues. Fairly well-written, only a few comments: Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 08:30, 22 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * Mind adding the name of the memoirs?
 * Maybe wikilink blood cancer?


 * Military career
 * Wikilink "Emir"
 * As ADC, Abu Nuwar was a major influence over then-20 year old Hussein Anything more on this?
 * The prose is excellent, I can not find any flaws that need to be corrected.


 * Later career
 * What is the Eisenhower Doctrine?


 * Hey Sainsf, appreciate the review. I think I've addressed your concerns now. --Al Ameer (talk) 18:43, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

Thanks, promoted. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 02:19, 27 June 2016 (UTC)