Talk:Alid revolt of 762–763/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 08:58, 4 December 2013 (UTC)

I will get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 08:58, 4 December 2013 (UTC)


 * Rephrase this: raising in revolt Medina Perhaps raising a revolt "in" Medina or "led Medina in a revolt"?
 * Is the "the" here correct? brought them to the Iraq
 * Otherwise nicely done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:57, 10 December 2013 (UTC)


 * Both done, plus some links to the sources for easier verification. Thanks for the review! Constantine  ✍  08:55, 10 December 2013 (UTC)