Talk:Alien (Britney Spears song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Prism (talk · contribs) 17:18, 15 April 2014 (UTC)

Review

Overview
— Two to correct (Tips: Substitute the URL of the second link and archive the first.)
 * External links

— None!
 * Disambiguation links

Prose
— "It is scheduled to be released in 2014 by RCA Records as a single from the record." (Move this to the end of the first paragraph)
 * Lead

— The part referring to the album reception is unnecessary considering the scope of the article. (Only the 'Despite...' part)


 * Background

— "The song was recorded on August 5, 2013." (Unsourced)


 * Composition

— "Mid-tempo" doesn't need a hyphen. — What reference supports it being a dance-pop midtempo number? If there is one it should be next to that part of the text.


 * Critical reception

— "shared a similar sentiment, expressed" → "expressing" — Try to paraphrase the section a bit; right now it is kind of a quote farm.


 * References

— FN13 has an incorrect title.

— Digital Spy's publisher is Hearst Magazines UK.

— The Huffington Post shouldn't be italicized.

File usage
— One image that has OTRS ticket to confirm permission. Checks out okay.

Review history
— April 15, 2014: Review.  prism  △ 17:18, 15 April 2014 (UTC)