Talk:Alihan Demir/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: BritneyErotica (talk · contribs) 17:01, 31 August 2023 (UTC)

Hi! Thank you for taking this on. Would "roughly" be better than "about"? I'm not sure how to express that. Remove the sentence entirely perhaps? And yeah, I guess adding the parents' last name is the best solution. I archived Reference 3, as well. Unfortunately, there doesn't seem to be a free image on Commons or Flickr at this time. JTtheOG (talk) 19:12, 31 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Ideally the exact amount would be provided (e.g., 41 schools). It read a bit speculative if that makes sense as in written without concrete information even if the source says "about". BritneyErotica (talk) 03:35, 1 September 2023 (UTC)
 * Sorry to jump in here, I hope it's ok to say that I'm noticing that you are quite new to reviewing BritneyErotica and if the source says "about" 40 schools then the article writer can only report that, or say "around" or "roughly". That doesn't make it speculative, since we can only use the available sources. Mujinga (talk) 21:47, 1 September 2023 (UTC)
 * I'm basically requesting further research to establish if that's the best source or if it can be more specific. BritneyErotica (talk) 03:42, 2 September 2023 (UTC)
 * I removed the sentence as there doesn't seem to be an exact number available out there. JTtheOG (talk) 05:04, 16 September 2023 (UTC)
 * I've read through everything again and it's all good. I can access the previously mentioned citation now so there are no issues with that. BritneyErotica (talk) 16:14, 20 September 2023 (UTC)