Talk:Alison Bethel-McKenzie

Article reads like a press release biography
This version is a major rewrite of the article and reads more like a press release biogrpahy than an encyclopedia article. user:Ageorgegal1 is a paid editor per this notice on their talk page. The change was made first made in this edit with an edit comment "Removed old text at the request to the subject and entered new and complete text." The changes made were reverted by user:Train2104 as promotional. I concur. The changes were added again. I reverted these changes however they were reverted again back to the promotional copy. Wikipedia is an encyclopedia and not a platform for self-promotion. The article needs to be cut down to a neutrally worded version. -- Whpq (talk) 13:18, 9 August 2017 (UTC)
 * I reverted it again. Neither of us is anywhere near 3RR anyway. – Train2104 (t • c) 23:10, 10 August 2017 (UTC)

Removing the hyphen between Bethel and McKenzie
What is the procedure for removing the hyphen between Bethel and McKenzie in the title of the page? --Ageorgegal1 (talk) 09:31, 25 August 2017 (UTC)