Talk:Alison Swan

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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): JackChadwick. Peer reviewers: BoardsofScotland, K223m.

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Peer Reviewed User:K223m
This article was very informative and well written. You had many sources and majority of them were reliable. You did a really good job covering all aspects of Alison Swan, from her career to where she grew up and how she got involved in the film business. The intro gave a good lead to the article, although I would maybe consider making it a little more concise by moving some of the less relevant information such as about her children into another part of your article. Also try not to start every sentence with “Alison Swan….” To give the article better flow. Overall this article was well done. :)

Peer Review User: BoardsofScotland
'''This is a well-written article with lots of good sourcing. Some of the information in the introductory paragraph can be moved into the Early Life/Education section for clarity. Also, Alison Swan's full name does not need to be addressed every time she is mentioned. Use replacement words like "she" or even just her last name to avoid repetition. Other than that, it is a concise and detailed article that has lots of good information about the filmmaker.''' — Preceding unsigned comment added by BoardsofScotland (talk • contribs) 18:03, 9 November 2016 (UTC)