Talk:Alive and Schticking/GA1

GA Review
The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.''

This article has about the same strengths and weaknesses as the last GAN of this show I reviewed, Talk:Marry_Me_a_Little,_Marry_Me_a_Little_More/GA1, and as such, also passes. Improvement can be made in both this and the other episode by attempting to restructure the last section on criticism, and also arranging it so that the article ends on a stronger note, as the criticism section somewhat peters out.

However, I feel this is an FA issue, not a GA one, so have no problem promoting this to GA. Shoemaker's Holiday Over 209 FCs served 19:57, 29 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks again for reviewing. Although I don't think it will happen anytime soon, User:ThinkBlue and will definitely work on that before we take it to FAC.  The left orium  20:04, 29 September 2009 (UTC)