Talk:All Hallows Catholic College, Macclesfield

Neutrality
Several parts of this article are written in the first person ("our," "we," etc.), plus the article cites absolutely no sources to the school's achievements. Because it's written almost like an ad for prospective parents rather than an encyclopedia article, this cannot be considered neutral and needs revising. -Lamarcus (talk) 19:42, 30 November 2008 (UTC)

I agree, this thing looks to be very opinionated. As a recent ex-student of this establishment, I can say that this article is very similar to what is handed out at parent evenings and PR events. 86.3.158.20 (talk) 22:36, 2 April 2009 (UTC)

The article has now been re-written using factual information and avoiding the first person. Hope it meets requirements. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Oremor (talk • contribs) 17:22, 15 April 2009 (UTC)

Underconstruction Tag.
Hello,

I would suggest using the underconstruction template on this article to prevent it from being proposed for deletion.--gordonrox24 (talk) 22:46, 2 April 2009 (UTC)