Talk:All Hours/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 23:09, 17 June 2018 (UTC)


 * Lead and infobox
 * For this part (After rejoining in 2008, they started), do you think that “reuniting” would be a better word than “rejoining”?
 * For this part (All Hours became Ivy's first album to enter a record chart in the United States), would it be better to link “record chart” to the page on Billboard charts rather than the generic term as you are specifically reference American charts in the context of this sentence?


 * Background and recording
 * Please link Ivy on the first use.
 * For this part (Following the end of a promotional tour for the album), I would use the album name as the previous sentence makes reference to two albums (In the Clear and the Bee Season soundtrack).
 * For this part (Chase also furthered work on his side project Brookville), the word “also” does not make sense in this context. I would remove the word.


 * Music and lyrics
 * Great work with this section


 * Singles
 * In this section, you say that all three singles has a music video, but the lead only mentions two music videos (i.e. The latter two songs were accompanied by music videos.).


 * Reception
 * I am confused by the structure of the first two paragraphs. How are the critics and their opinions grouped together?
 * If you are going to link record chart in the lead, then it should be linked in the body of the article.


 * Final comments
 * Great work with this article. I only have relatively minor suggestions for fixes. Hope you have a wonderful rest of your weekend! Aoba47 (talk) 23:09, 17 June 2018 (UTC)
 * – Thanks as always. I adjusted the article accordingly – but one thing, you mention in the 'Singles' section that all three singles have music videos but I actually "Distant Lights" never had one and I never mentioned that in the text; maybe things were unclear? Lemme know, thanks. Carbrera (talk) 00:09, 23 June 2018 (UTC).
 * Thank you for addressing everything! I misread that part so thank you for clarifying that for me. I will ✅ this. Aoba47 (talk) 01:17, 23 June 2018 (UTC)