Talk:All I Ask of You/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 08:19, 24 December 2017 (UTC)

Lead

 * and produced by Lloyd Webber → while solely produced by Webber
 * its lyrics serve as dialogue → its lyrics serve as a dialogue
 * Critically, the song → Link "Critically" to Music criticism
 * like in Ireland → including
 * where it topped the charts → ,where it topped the charts,
 * It was later certified in the → It was later certified Silver in the
 * Lloyd Webber's brother → Webber's brother
 * The song has been covered by various artists and musicians, most famously → You repeat yourself here. Say "A notable cover versio of "All I Ask of You" was recorded..."

Infobox

 * Flawless ;)

Background and release

 * was developed by Lloyd Webber → was developed by Webber
 * 1910 novel The Phantom of the Opera → 1910 novel of the same name
 * Lloyd Webber was sued by → Webber was sued by
 * "The Music of the Night" → release year in brackets
 * Lloyd Webber in 2009, further compared → Webber in 2009, further compared
 * which was featured on Lloyd Webber's 1984 → which was featured on Webber's 1984
 * as the thirteenth track → as the 13th track
 * Erik (a.k.a the Phantom of the Opera) → you don't need the "(a.k.a ...)"; just say "character Erik"

Composition and lyrics

 * was headed by Lloyd Webber → was headed by Webber
 * wrote that Puccini's work is much longer → wrote that Puccini's work was much longer
 * contains a more vocal delivery → What do you want to say here?
 * when compared to Lloyd Webber's → when compared to Webber's

Reception

 * stated that song contains → stated that song contained
 * The song was later certified silver → The song was later certified Silver
 * "In the Army Now" → year of release in brackets
 * on the country's Springbok Radio chart.[17] It also charted in Australia, where according to the Kent Music Report it peaked at number 24.[18] → on the country's Springbok Radio chart,[17] while charting at number 24 in Australia, according to the Kent Music Report.[18]

Track listings

 * Flawless ;)

Charts

 * Flawless ;)

Certifications

 * Flawless ;)

Cover versions

 * recorded two other Lloyd Webber → recorded two other Webber

Infobox

 * Flawless ;)

Background and release

 * for her twenty-ninth studio → for her 29th studio
 * I could find no ther flaw ;)

Reception

 * single "Memory" and later wrote → Unlink "Memory", as noted before
 * entering the region at number 79 → just remove "the region"
 * and spent five weeks charting altogether → "altogether" is superfluous

Track listings and formats

 * Flawless ;)

Charts

 * Flawless ;)

Outcome

 * Very good and informative article! It was really an interesting reading!  for 7 days... Best; Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:47, 29 December 2017 (UTC)
 * – Thanks for the review. I addressed all of your concerns. And just to clarify, the 'Lloyd' in 'Lloyd Webber' is legally part of his last name so 'Lloyd' should be included in all instances where his last name is used. Thanks again, Carbrera (talk) 19:04, 31 December 2017 (UTC).
 * Gladly passing! Congrats, Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:36, 31 December 2017 (UTC)