Talk:All I Want for Christmas Is You/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Xwomanizerx (talk) 04:50, 11 November 2010 (UTC)


 * 1) Lead
 * 2) Remove the apostrophes on ""one of the essential musical hallmarks of the holiday season and continues to set records each year."
 * I can't its a direct quote.-- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   22:16, 13 November 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) The covers sentence is a little off in the middle of the reception paragraph, maybe you should consider moving it to the last paragraph. ✅
 * 2) however garnering strong airplay. - > but garnered strong airplay. ✅
 * 3) ringtone -> ringtones
 * We aren't saying "One of the best" its the best-selling ringtone-- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   22:16, 13 November 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) The video part, try to unite the first and third sentence into one. ✅
 * 2) You repeat "the video" as well as "the song" many times. ✅
 * Lol I switched like 25 "The song"-- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   22:16, 13 November 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) Background and writing
 * 2) Composition
 * 3) Remove -> "compared the songs instrumentation to the style of The Beach Boys and" ✅
 * 4) Add link to the Beach Boys. ✅
 * 5) Critical reception
 * 6) Chart performance
 * 7) Remove the apostrophes in the first sentence. ✅
 * 8) Replace "the song" for "it" on "the song was unable to attain a new peak". ✅
 * 9) Remove "has been" on "has been topped". ✅
 * 10) Recording Industry Association of Japan + (RIAJ). ✅
 * 11) Music videos
 * 12) A disambiguation link.. ✅
 * 13) Remixes and 2010 version
 * 14) Replace "the remix" for "it" on "Kyle Anderson from MTV thought the remix". ✅
 * 15) Remove "but wrote". ✅
 * 16) Remove "the song" in "the song's review". ✅
 * 17) In the last sentence, use this (') instead of (") inside quotes. ✅
 * 18) Live performances and cover versions

It's done now. Xwomanizerx (talk) 17:54, 13 November 2010 (UTC)


 * All done!-- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   22:16, 13 November 2010 (UTC)


 * Passed! Xwomanizerx (talk) 16:26, 14 November 2010 (UTC)