Talk:All Is Full of Love/GA1

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 13:31, 10 December 2016 (UTC)

Review coming soon... Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 13:31, 10 December 2016 (UTC)
 * Sorry for the delay. Unfortunately, I was very busy. I'm going to end this in the course of the next week. Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 23:35, 16 December 2016 (UTC)
 * No problem buddy, take your time. :) Alex talk 13:01, 17 December 2016 (UTC)

Lead

 * Before I'll give comments to this section, please be sure you follow the following structure for the lead:
 * 1st paragraph: Name of the song and album, Released for digital download through LABEL, enlist songwriters & producers, info about the genre and instrumentation, etc
 * 2nd paragraph: Music critics's opinion, Accolades?
 * 3rd paragraph: Commercial success (charts & certs), Promotion: music video (when released?, where shot?, short plot, awards for the video?), Inclusion on any greatest hits/compilation CDs, live performances?

Infobox

 * Cover art for UK CD1 single → Cover artwork used to commercialize physical editions of the single.

Background and composition

 * original version of the track → you've already used "track" before; alternate here
 * It was inspired by the advent of spring → Who was inspired? It doesn't make any sense?
 * among other people, for six months, → Remove comma
 * Björk recalls: → She confessed;
 * David Hemingway, Björk said: "you have → David Hemingway, Björk explained; "you have
 * all over again;"[4] referring to Ragnarök. → all over again,"[4] referring to Ragnarök
 * The previous track, → Homogenic track
 * stands for that death → stands for death
 * stands for that new beginning → stands for a new beginning
 * "believing in love" and that "love → "believing in love", and expressed that "love
 * As it opposes the rest of Homogenic's "macho" aesthethic, Björk has described "All Is Full of Love" as the first song on Vespertine. → This doesn't make any sense; do you mean she suggested it could have been included on Vespertine as well?
 * The lyrics begins → The lyrics begin
 * Your doors are shut," → The right order is, after "
 * have to "Twist → have to "twist
 * around you" that, "Love is all around you". → sentence is grammatically wrong
 * effected musically → other way round
 * accompaniment in the ambient song → accompaniment and portrays an ambient song
 * envisaged by Björk → envisaged by the singer (word repetition)
 * off into Björk gospel → off into [her] gospel (word repetition)
 * included in the album, → included on the album,
 * The best known version of the song, and the most preferred by fans and Björk herself, it is known by various names including "Mark Stent Mix" and "Video Mix". → Reportedly the best known and the most preferred version by Björk's fans and herself, it is further known under the names of "Mark Stent Mix" and "Video Mix".

Release

 * Full of Love", remixed by German → Full of Love", containing a remix by German
 * This remix had been included → This remix had been (previously/later?) included
 * Add year of release for "Hunter" in bracktes
 * had been released as a B-side of → had been distributed as a B-side for
 * a single in promotion of an album → a single for promoting an album
 * music video was more → accompanying music video would be more
 * again and[18] → you don't need a ref here
 * though the release of the single → although the premiere of the single (word repetition)
 * "All Is Full of Love" was released → Subsequently, "All Is Full of Love" was distributed (word repetition)
 * in VHS → in VHS format
 * Some regard → Some publications regard
 * In the UK, it was also released → In the United Kingdom, it was made available (word rep.)
 * consists of stills → consists of shots
 * can be seen in the video as well → can be seen in the visual, as well (word rep.)
 * of the 2002 → of the singer's 2002
 * whose tracks were selected → you've already used "track" before
 * through a survey. "All Is Full of Love" was the second most voted song, coming after "Hyperballad". → through a survey, in which the single was the second most-voted song after "Hyperballad" (1996).

Critical reception

 * In a review for the album as a whole → While reviewing Homogenic,
 * "sublime rebirth."[12] Tiny Mix Tapes commented → "sublime rebirth", and Tiny Mix Tapes commented
 * Unlink "Music Tech" as it's red linked
 * AllMusic's Heather Phares → no full names twice, please
 * Slant Magazine → italics
 * their list of The 100 Best Singles of the 1990s writing: → their list of "The 100 Best Singles of the 1990s", writing;

Music video

 * Björk contacted Cunningham and they met at his London office → This resulted in the singer contacting him to meet at his London office
 * Björk recalls: "I → Regrading this, the singer confessed, "I
 * was very white ... and I'm trying → ... to [...]
 * just clean ... And I think → ... to [...]
 * he wrote down the words → he reportedly wrote down the words
 * "surgery". The words outline → "surgery"; they outline
 * the music video and says, "It's like Karma → the music video. Concerning this, Cunningham added that "it's like Karma
 * Initially, there would be a final stage where the two robots unfolded like a flower as they mate, revealing → Initially, it was planned that as the visual's final stage, the two protagonist robots from the clip would unfold like a flower as they mate, revealing
 * could not manage to do it → could not manage to materialize this thought
 * and Cunningham has said that "perhaps → to which Cunningham said that "perhaps
 * Link Aphex Twin
 * It's already linked, no need to do it twice


 * Add release date for "Windowlicker" in brackets
 * The treatment describes → past tense please, and what do you mean with "the treatment"?
 * The treatment is what the video is supposed to be before it is filmed.


 * The director was, however, dissatisfied → However, the music video's director was dissatisfied
 * He exemplified: "on → He exemplified, "on
 * He first shot → He reportedly first shot
 * seconds; he then removed → seconds, and then removed
 * eyes and mouth were actually used; the rest of the robot head was 3D animation → eyes and mouth were used, with the rest of the robot representing 3D animation
 * He has described the filming process as an unpleasant experience: → Glasswork has described the filming process as an unpleasant experience,
 * For the quote, fix all the ... to [...]
 * Björk stated, "I guess → Concerning this, the singer stated, "I guess
 * I've edited the synopsis by myself, just as I do with every GAN that I take for review
 * wrote the video "marked → wrote the visual "marked (word repetition)
 * "All Is Full of Love" music video as one → "All Is Full of Love" clip for being one
 * Video in the Music Week → "in" to "at"
 * In the D&AD Awards → At the D&AD Awards
 * In the MVPA Awards → Furthermore, at the MVPA Awards
 * two awards in the 2000 MTV Video Music Awards: → "in" to "at"
 * Music Video in the 2000 International Monitor Awards, → Music Video at the 2000 International Monitor Awards (FULL STOP)
 * The video has also received various → Particularly, the visual won various nominations
 * Please fix "in" to "at" for the remaining nominations
 * "All Is Full of Love" placed on number 14 → "All Is Full of Love" was placed at number 14
 * and was placed in Time's list → and was ranked in Time's (link the magazine) list
 * It's already linked in the article, no need to do it twice


 * fifth greatest → fifth-greatest
 * as old marble;" a clear reference to "All Is Full of Love" → as old marble", as a reference to "All Is Full of Love"
 * the 2015 American film → Remove overfluous "the"

Live performances

 * regarding Homogenic → concerning Homogenic
 * she would later wear → she would later sport (word rep.)
 * Add release year in brackets for "Bachelorette"
 * of the set list of the → of the set list for her
 * and the Icelandic String Octet → remove overfluous "the"
 * of 2001 → in 2001
 * The tour was performed in concert halls and opera houses so as to "have → During the tour, the singer performed in concert halls and opera houses in order to "have
 * (which included a performance of "All Is Full of Love") →, which included...
 * also be found in → also be found on
 * was released in Vespertine Live → was released through Vespertine Live
 * included in the 2006 → included on the 2006
 * String Octet, but with the addition of Vespertine World Tour collaborators Matmos and Zeena Parkins → String Octet and Matmos and Zeena Parkins (unlink here)
 * included in the 2005 → included on the 2005

Usage in media and cover versions

 * included in the official soundtrack → included on the official soundtrack
 * in the soundtrack → on the soundtrack
 * The song was also used in the → "All Is Full of Love" was further used for the (alternating)
 * and placed it on → and added it to
 * "Love Is Dead", from → no comma

Track listings

 * flawless ;)

Credits and personnel

 * Credits adapted from Homogenic's and "All Is Full of Love" single liner notes. → Credits adapted from the liner notes of Homogenic (unlink) and the single's physical release.

Charts

 * However, in the United States → Remove "however"
 * peaking at number eight → To alternate, state "reaching number eight" here.

Copy-violation

 * 72.6% is WAY too much! Please reduce to under 40% for the most-violated sources at the top of the list

Images and others

 * The image with the logo of the single's releases brings nothing to the article, and please remove it thus.
 * Other images seem to be stable
 * Audio samples stable, as well ;)

Links

 * No problems here!