Talk:All Saved Freak Band

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Added and tested 23 internal links, two more external links. This will complete the total revision of the page. --Asfband (talk) 14:30, 23 October 2008 (UTC)User:Asfband

Added footnotes and references for verification. User:Asfband October 22, 2008  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Asfband (talk • contribs) 14:07, 22 October 2008 (UTC)

I've edited the page to remove subject matter that belongs in its own entry, ending the conflict between two, distinct subject matters - The All Saved Freak Band and the Church of the Risen Christ. The entire page was updated with info about ASFB in an effort to make it a worth while contribution for Wikipedia. All info is based on entries made by ASFB co-founder, Joe Markko. User:Asfband October 20, 2008

I removed the link to "Church of the Risen Christ", which leads to a church in Singapore and is obviously not what's being referred to. Accounting4Taste 21:05, 1 June 2007 (UTC)

From Requested feedback
Good job on trying to solve the article issues. A couple of formatting points:

1) The citations are wrongly formatted. I added "Reflist", which will auto fill in the references. Now the citations that were manually entered should be moved to the sentence they prove (after the full stop), inside ref tags. The tags are in most cases already there (they make the superscript numbers in the text), so simply copy and paste in between the tags. I already fixed one (number 11) as an example and removed the unreferenced tag.

2)The citations to print material need the page number and publisher.

3) Paragraphs should have only one space between them.

4)I'll remove the "coatrack" tag, as i don't see why it is there, and there is no talk discussion. I alro made overview into the lead, and removed a copy/paste redundancy.

I only read through it quickly, but i think after the citations are fixed, most projects would pass it as a C. Click on the project banners at the top of the talk page to find the assessment pages, if you are interested.Yobmod (talk) 11:05, 24 October 2008 (UTC)

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