Talk:All You Had to Do Was Stay/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 05:33, 9 July 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Dora the Axe-plorer (talk · contribs) 15:54, 14 July 2024 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
 * a (reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Overall, article is well-written but a few fine-tuning needed. Stays on-topic, no recent edit conflicts and of acceptable length.
 * Avoid the awkward repetition of "song" in "Lyrically, the song is a breakup song that samples a panicked Swift shouting the word, "stay", throughout the song," ... eg "breakup anthem", "throughout the song" → "throughout its runtime/duration/length"
 * clarify, "including the masters of Swift's albums that the label had released." → "including the masters of Swift's albums released under the label.:
 * ce, "could have been mistaken to be sung by" → "could have been mistaken for one sung by"

Sources and verifiability pending. Ping when done.Dora the Axe-plorer (explore) 21:04, 18 July 2024 (UTC)