Talk:All of the Dead Girls

sentence in the lead may need a copyedit?
This sentence: Music critics provided mixed reviews of "All of the Dead Girls", who were indifferent towards the song's lyrics. doesn't seem to make grammatical sense, and I'm not sure how to edit it. It reads like the dead girls were indifferent toward the song's lyrics? Is that really what we mean here? —valereee (talk) 20:31, 26 March 2021 (UTC)