Talk:All of the Girls You Loved Before/GA1

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Reviewer: Pamzeis (talk · contribs) 05:11, 17 July 2023 (UTC)

Hi, I'll be reviewing this article. This is my first time reviewing a music article, so alert me if I screw anything up. Pamzeis (talk) 05:11, 17 July 2023 (UTC)


 * the song for what they deemed affectionate lyrics and — seems kinda clunky. Maybe replace "what they deemed" with "perceived" or similar?
 * but cancelled the → but canceled the (American English)
 * "Safe & Sound (Taylor's Version)", "If This Was a Movie (Taylor's Version)" → "Safe & Sound (Taylor's Version)", and "If This Was a Movie (Taylor's Version)"
 * his birthname Adam King Feeney as writer → his birthname, Adam King Feeney, as writer
 * and, although Swift did not confirm the inspiration behind, media publications interpreted it as a message to her then-boyfriend — it seems pretty clunky... can it be reworded or split?
 * all the women in his life and promises — add a comma before "and"
 * memorable, catchy melody → a memorable, catchy melody
 * gold" an the lyrics — typo?
 * "breezy" and The Times' Will Hodgkinson — comma before "and"
 * familiar and wrote that it — comma before "and"
 * artist with an "uninterrupted" 18-year run — are the quote marks necessary? They feel like scare quotes to me
 * What makes Our Culture Mag a reliable source?

Great article overall with very minor issues. Article now. Ping me in your replies. Pamzeis (talk) 06:27, 17 July 2023 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the review, . I have addressed all of your comments accordingly :) Let me know if it needs further work. Ippantekina (talk) 08:33, 17 July 2023 (UTC)

Second look
Everything seems fine now! the article. Pamzeis (talk) 14:08, 17 July 2023 (UTC)