Talk:Allah Baksh Sarshar Uqaili

Speedy deletion nomination of Allah Baksh Sarshar Uqaili
Please let the page stay, and point out the mistakes in it..I will surely consider them and will correct them as soon as possible. This person enlightened the minds of many, he should have a wikipedia page.. Please dont delete it rather help me in correctig itCooldemocrat (talk) 18:23, 11 March 2010 (UTC)
 * You need to find independent sources that assert the notability of the person involved. Look for references in books or newspapers or even web pages.  18:31, 11 March 2010 (UTC)

Please dont delete this before replying to me about pointing out the mistakes in it...What's wrong with it..what should I add what should I subtract????Cooldemocrat (talk) 18:35, 11 March 2010 (UTC)
 * I don't get to delete it or not. I just put a tag on it because I saw some major technical flaws.  If I was mistaken, and administrator will remove the tag.  Do try to find more sources.  Cheers, PhGustaf (talk) 18:43, 11 March 2010 (UTC)

May I know the major technical flaws please, so that i can correct themCooldemocrat (talk) 20:36, 11 March 2010 (UTC) I can realise that some one undoes the changes that I make and those changes might make the article counter the deletion policy 59.103.137.143 (talk) 17:55, 14 March 2010 (UTC)

Copy Edit of Family History
The article had this section: "Haji Allah Baksh the son of Haji Hafiz Muhammad siddique Thattvi discendent of Hazrat Ali's (R.A) elder brother Hazrat Aqeel bin Abu Talib (R.A) from whose offspring is Imam Abu Jaffar Uqaili. Thatta's Uqaili family had Qazi Bin Muhammad Qasim as their chief who came to settle in Thatta in the Mughal era.

I confess, I can't unravel the lineage, and since it's not clear and I'm not sure how necessary it is, I moved it here until it can be improved. --Nuujinn (talk) 21:02, 21 March 2010 (UTC)

Names
One question is how this person should be addressed. I confess to knowing nothing about Pakistani naming conventions. Some questions:


 * I added a "'" to 'Uqaili, since that appears to be a common spelling. Is that ok?


 * Evidently, this person wrote under a pen name. Was that pen name "Sarshar 'Uqaili" or just "Sarshar"?


 * The article uses "Allah Bux" and "Allah Baksh", what is the difference in these? Can we settle on one or the other, or in there a distinct meaning for each?


 * The article also used "Sarshar Uqaili" and "Uqaili", but my feeling is we should settle on one name if possible for the article. Thoughts?

Thanks for any help, --Nuujinn (talk) 21:54, 21 March 2010 (UTC)