Talk:Allan Walters/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk) 01:13, 25 March 2010 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


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Comments Hawkeye7 (talk) 01:23, 25 March 2010 (UTC)
 * the New Guinea theatre I don't like this term. The theatre was SWPA.
 * Fair enough, I was looking to work the New Guinea campaign link in, but I guess we could just say "New Guinea area"...
 * based in New Guinea Any idea where his headquarters actually was?
 * Odgers reports it as Madang in mid-1944 and then never refers to the HQ's location again. Given its whole point was as a static area command, I guess we can assume it was still there during Walters' term as AOC, which started six months later.
 * Tks for reviewing, Hawkeye. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 02:02, 25 March 2010 (UTC)