Talk:Allan Zullo

Article Feedback
I am practicing how to evaluate and edit articles for a course, and I am providing the following suggestions as part of an assignment. The lead provides some information that is not present in the article, as well as statements that are not cited (i.e., education, desk calendars, and comic strip.) Sections could be created for early life or education as well as kinds of creative works: children's series, books, comics, desk calendars, etc. With everything in one long bulleted list in the bibliography section, it is rather difficult to read. It would be easier to read if broken down into smaller sections where it could be expanded upon in paragraph form. DanaGhouse (talk) 10:35, 25 October 2019 (UTC)