Talk:Allolobophora chlorotica

I included a lot of comments on the actual hard-copy. I don't think the lead really captures the important information about your topic, you only included it in your last sentence. I think you can do without the first few sentences and just add more of a summary of your topic. You forgot to italicize "allolobophora chlorotica" throughout your paper. I also believe you can do without the conservation section of your topic, because you don't really have any information on it, unless you can actually find some on conservation efforts for your species. Overall, good paper, you had a lot of good information. Very cool about the genetics part you added in. But with that I would just explain what the experiment resulted in and what that means so the overall conclusion from the experiment and who conducted it. Ginahan24 (talk) 04:36, 5 April 2017 (UTC)Ginahan24