Talk:Alou Diarra/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Utinsh (talk) 14:13, 7 April 2011 (UTC)

I found only few issues:


 * Villepinte, Free transfer and Trial links to a disambiguation pages; please, link those correctly.
 * Done.  –J10S   Talk 19:44, 7 April 2011 (UTC)


 * Overlinking; OGC Nice and Le Mans FC are linked multiple times in the body of the article.
 * Done.  –J10S   Talk 19:44, 7 April 2011 (UTC)


 * Referencing; His Bayern number assignment and nine yellow cards needs a reference each. "Bordeaux also recorded its second ever double, as a result of its league cup title" needs a cite too.
 * Done.  –J10S   Talk 19:44, 7 April 2011 (UTC)


 * Maybe split up Bordeaux section in two sub-sections as it is twice as long as any other section.
 * Done.  –J10S   Talk 19:44, 7 April 2011 (UTC)


 * Article could do with a bit more info on his personal life. Is he married/have kids? Education, current residency etc.
 * Done. Couldn't find anything on his education, though.  –J10S   Talk 19:44, 7 April 2011 (UTC)

The prose is good, article is neutral and well sourced, references are well formatted and there are no dead links. I'll pass as a good article after you will have addressed the tiny issues I brought up. Utinsh (talk) 14:13, 7 April 2011 (UTC)