Talk:Aluminium/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kepler-1229b (talk · contribs) 18:03, 5 February 2021 (UTC)

Do you have any specific concerns re 1a? Double sharp (talk) 13:40, 11 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Double sharp (talk) 13:51, 14 February 2021 (UTC)
 * No. 🪐Kepler-1229b &#124; talk &#124; contribs🪐 21:47, 17 February 2021 (UTC)


 * An observation, the first five (5) sentences of the lead all start "Aluminium..." - that should be tweaked if possible....Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 00:46, 18 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Tweaked it. Double sharp (talk) 11:32, 19 February 2021 (UTC)

So pass? Keresluna (talk) 18:03, 30 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Keresluna (talk) 22:49, 30 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Pass, it has been two months. I see no reason to oppose that change. Keresluna (talk) 17:54, 2 April 2021 (UTC)