Talk:Alvin Alvarez

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Hi Bianca,

I think your wikipedia entry on Alvin Alvarez is great and well done without any real grammatical errors or glaring mistakes. The only thing that I might change if this were my entry would be to separate the Family section from the section about the show he is most known for. The paragraph goes from talking about his real life family to all of a sudden talking about his fictional chracter's family. I just think think that it might be clearer if you make an individual section for the show that he is most famous for but other than I think it was great!

Brad Z.