Talk:Always Say Goodbye

Oddly structured
It's probably not good to start out the article with something like "feature excerpts from Hawks's masterpiece..." without naming who Hawks is first. That's in the next paragraph. I guess I can fix this.

But also, the review that was quoted, did you catch that? "The results, though at first a little bit unsettling..." I mean, for a review to say that an album is unsettling, it kind of makes you wonder what he heard that made him feel that way. But then when you read the review that was referenced, you see the quote was taken out of context. What's unsettling at first is not the album, it's a specific technique that Haden (et al) used in structuring this album, and I think it is important to note that.

I'll see if I can make some minor edits to fix some of this, but I wanted to mention it here because these are generally applicable details. Always reference the full name of a subject first, and give proper context to quotes or outside referenced material. K9gardner (talk) 16:53, 28 November 2023 (UTC)