Talk:Alyssa Healy

Quick Lead Comments

 * "... she is the daughter of Greg Healy, who played one first-class  match while her uncle, Ian  Healy, was Australia's Test  wicket-keeper and was the world record holder for the most Test  dismissals." Should a comma be added before while? Or even after, perhaps.
 * "Healy first came to prominence in late 2006 when she became the first girl to play among boys in the private schools' competition in New South  Wales." Should this be "amongst"? p
 * How come you don't use a hypen for "late 2006"? Did it come up in the last FAC?
 * "Coleman left New South Wales at the start of the 2009–10 season and Healy took on the glovework on a full-time basis for her state." Repitition.
 * "In that season ..." Doesn't read too well.
 * "She played in the first five one-day internationals (ODIs) ..." I thought we used capitals and got rid of the hypen unless we were saying "one-day match".

— Aaroncrick  ( talk )   02:30, 12 March 2010 (UTC)
 * No hyphen says Brian. Otherwise doen  YellowMonkey  ( vote in the Southern Stars and White Ferns supermodel photo poll )  03:36, 12 March 2010 (UTC)

Family
The article says that Alyssa's father Greg Healy has played one first-class match. However, CricketArchive's page on him shows he hasn't played first-class cricket, but has two matches for Northern Suburbs. She also has another uncle, Ken Healy, who has played one first-class (and one List A) match. &mdash;Raven42 (talk) 06:28, 19 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks, fixed  YellowMonkey  ( vote in the Southern Stars and White Ferns supermodel photo poll )  06:45, 19 March 2010 (UTC)