Talk:Amador Valley High School/GA1

GA Review
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Looking good at first glance. Will review.  -shirulashem (talk) 19:56, 10 July 2009 (UTC) Some things to work on:
 * There's some subtle non-NPOV content. I've removed some, but there's still a little more.  -shirulashem (talk) 20:26, 10 July 2009 (UTC)
 * I have addressed some of this issue by removing some additional non-NPOV content.Deltawk (talk) 03:52, 12 July 2009 (UTC)


 * There's no mention of any sports.  -shirulashem (talk) 20:26, 10 July 2009 (UTC)
 * This has been addressed.  -shirulashem (talk) 19:37, 16 July 2009 (UTC)


 * The lead paragraph seems a little too long. Might want to tighten it up a little.  -shirulashem (talk) 20:26, 10 July 2009 (UTC)
 * I've tightened up the lead a bit by removing some of the sentences summarizing academics and extracurriculars. I was able to shrink the lead from 4 paragraphs to 3. Deltawk (talk) 21:51, 10 July 2009 (UTC)


 * Well done. The article is well-written, the sources have been verified, the coverage spans the important points, the minor WP:NPOV issues have been corrected, it has a stable edit history, and there are some nice pretty pictures.  -shirulashem (talk) 19:37, 16 July 2009 (UTC)