Talk:Amar Asha

GOCE copyedit request
&, I have started a copyedit of this article. There are a few things I would like to ask:
 * IPA pronounciation: The audio file appears to sound a little different compared to the transcribed IPA, namely the "ʃ" sounding more like an "s".
 * The IPA is correct but if is still unclear, I will rerecord and upload. -Nizil (talk) 05:00, 18 February 2020 (UTC)
 * That would be wonderful. I've listened to it several times and I couldn't hear it spoken as it was transcribed. Might just be a quality issue. -- Tenryuu (🐲 • 💬 • 🌟) 05:43, 18 February 2020 (UTC)


 * [...] has been composed in Persian beher (meter) Hazaj: To clarify, the poem is composed in the Persian Hazaj meter?
 * Beher meters has sub-meters including Hazaj. So Beher Hazaj is correct.
 * Alright, I've changed it for the meantime, but I will probably think of something better tomorrow. -- Tenryuu (🐲 • 💬 • 🌟) 05:43, 18 February 2020 (UTC)


 * He noted that it is written by a Hindu scholar in an Islamic style so Hindus and Muslims both should be proud of it: I copyedited this sentence a little but is the intent of composing it in this way so that both religions can understand, appreciate, or take pride? They are somewhat similar but if this could be narrowed down that would be helpful.
 * In Gandhi's words, "both should be proud of it" because Hindu scholar wrote in Islamic style. "Take pride in it" is also OK. Manilal had not stated this reason but reviewer Gandhi suggested to take pride.
 * Okay. I'm using a direct quote from Gandhi and used the same reference. That should take care of that issue, though you should probably check with someone more experienced in citations and references to ensure that is proper referencing.
 * Checked. Referenced OK.

Hope to hear from you soon! -- Tenryuu (🐲 • 💬 • 🌟) 17:36, 17 February 2020 (UTC)
 * Thank you for copyediting. I have replied to your comments.-Nizil (talk) 05:00, 18 February 2020 (UTC)
 * Article has been updated and replies have been replied to. I will make another copyedit tomorrow and that should complete my copyedit for this article. -- Tenryuu (🐲 • 💬 • 🌟) 05:43, 18 February 2020 (UTC)
 * I've made another minor copyedit and will mark my edit as complete in about 7 hours. -- Tenryuu (🐲 • 💬 • 🌟) 23:11, 19 February 2020 (UTC)
 * , I am OK with all the changes. Than you very much for copyediting. -Nizil (talk) 07:48, 20 February 2020 (UTC)