Talk:Amazonas before the Inca Empire

Comment
In my opinion, all the information about the Chachapoyas culture in this article should be transferred to Chachapoyas culture and deleted here because in the context of this Amazonas article it is too specific. -- Meister 09:12, 31 August 2007 (UTC)

This article needs to be edited. The wording is awkward and it sounds as though whoever wrote the article didn't speak very good English. In some places it's difficult to tell what point the article is trying to make. 75.208.238.161 (talk) 21:23, 12 April 2008 (UTC)


 * I have improved some of the wording. Fortunately I could do this mostly be deleting superfluous (and pompous-sounding) phrases. I don't claim to have finished the job, but I hope I have given it a push in the right direction. I won't argue with the proposal to move the whole thing to "Chachapoyas culture", I don't know enough to comment. Maproom (talk) 11:34, 18 December 2008 (UTC)