Talk:Ambush (ER)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 03:08, 23 January 2023 (UTC)

Almost there. Some copy tweaks and also some suggestions in re: sourcing. Templates like pq can come in really handy for heavy ProQuest users. 7-day hold to. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 03:08, 23 January 2023 (UTC)


 * @GamerPro64 I caught one other issue in fixing all the newspaper clippings. The Steve Hall review was not from the Indianapolis Star but its sister daily, the Indianapolis News. Sammi Brie  (she/her • t • c) 05:36, 23 January 2023 (UTC)

Copy changes

 * Hyphenate "most-watched"
 * Done. - GamerPro64  04:47, 23 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Add a comma after "joins the hospital" (User:Sammi Brie/Commas in sentences)
 * Done. - GamerPro64  04:47, 23 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Some of the sentences in the Production section are of very similar length back to back, leading to choppy reading
 * Reworked some parts of the section around. GamerPro64  04:47, 23 January 2023 (UTC)
 * I'd use "lead to" rather than "lead into"
 * Done. - GamerPro64  04:47, 23 January 2023 (UTC)
 * the writing, calling the script "hackneyed" and Complete the appositive by adding a comma outside the quotation after "hackneyed"
 * Done. - GamerPro64  04:47, 23 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Steve Hall for The Indianapolis Star, while finding a few moments to be "undeniably powerful", he felt that the documentary crew plot device cheapened moments such as Dr. Morganstern suffering a heart attack. The "he" is not needed
 * Done. - GamerPro64  04:47, 23 January 2023 (UTC)
 * October 6th, 1997 Date formatting and an MOS:DATECOMMA; change to "October 6, 1997,"
 * Done. - GamerPro64  04:47, 23 January 2023 (UTC)

Sourcing and spot checks
Earwig turns up no issues (top number is a content mill mirroring us).


 * 5 (OC Register New York Daily News): "More exciting than daunting" quote is included. ✅
 * 6 (USA Today): Producers shot a version of the episode Wednesday as a fallback, in case of technical difficulties tonight, but the live show is expected to go smoothly. ✅
 * 8: Viewership figure in LAT national Nielsen ratings feature is correct. ✅
 * 15: Gold Derby list ranks the episode 12th. ✅
 * 17: List of Emmy nominations. ✅

Images
This page has no images. I see one tangential one was culled during peer review.

Encouragements
Not required for GA specifications, but good best practices.


 * Clip newspapers.com citations and use that as the URL. Some multipage articles require multiple clippings.
 * Use ProQuest document IDs. You do this by adding to the id parameter of the relevant citation the document number corresponding to each resource, which is in the URL, wrapped in ProQuest or its shortcut pq. For instance, the USA Today reference has an ID of 408734998, so you would put.
 * To make it easier, here are the other two.
 * Orange County Register: 273015476. This is actually a reprint from the New York Daily News the day before.
 * Boston Globe: 403882861