Talk:American Homeowner Preservation

Article issues
This article needs considerable pruning and copyediting. It is written not as a straightforward history of the company with a brief description of its activity, but as an alternative web page for it and advertisement for their potential clients and investors. It is also devoid inline citations to verify the claims made in the article. There is probably enough press coverage from reliable independent sources to justify inclusion of this article, but note that several of the sources listed in "Press coverage" are simply press-releases and/or entries from blogs and other sites with user-generated content. They need to be pruned. I have placed the COI tag on this article because it has been extensively edited by a user with the same name as the company, and it shows. Earlier versions of this article were even more promotional in tone suggesting that they too were written either by someone associated with the company or a paid editor. Voceditenore (talk) 07:04, 24 July 2014 (UTC)

CONFLICT OF INTEREST - WRITING ABOUT ONE'S SELF - BLATENT COMMERCIAL PROMOTION / ADVERTISING.

This article was written by Jorge Newbery with the assistance of the young lady in his office who was the acting marketing person. This really doesn't belong on wikipedia as this is nothing but thinly veiled promotional / advertising piece. Wikipedia should remove, especially as there are now suspicions about the handling of AHP's books. I have been involved in a due diligence investigation of the fund and find this article to violate Wikipedia's intentions and mission. It is my feeling the article simply needs to be removed as Mr. Newbery is using wikipedia to validate the investment fund he is operating. Firstly, the mission of the company as stated in the article represents a minute fraction of their business (this is 100% for profit). Second, Leaving this page on wikipedia gives Mr. Newbery a respected resource from which to convince investors to bring him money for his fund. Sounds like promotion and advertising to me. ZentraderX (talk) 22:52, 31 August 2015 (UTC)