Talk:American Jewish anti-Bolshevism during the Russian Revolution

Update on article in relation to review and proposed deletion
I worked to edit the article per the request of my reviewer. I am very thankful for your advice. Sorry that the format was more like a term paper than a Wikipedia article. I am more used to that format, but I really wanted to create this article. I hope that it is improved enough to remain on Wikipedia, even if it needs more edits in future.

(talk) 04:00, 20 May 2017 (UTC)

Issues with this article
It appears to be a synthesis from material in other sources and from the way it is written it looks like a term paper or homework assignment.. Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 02:45, 19 May 2017 (UTC)