Talk:American bittern/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Dunkleosteus77 (talk · contribs) 18:41, 26 November 2015 (UTC)

Comments by Dunkleosteus77

 * Is this written in American English? If so, add the template to the article's talk page.
 * Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:16, 27 November 2015 (UTC)

General comments

 * In the lead, change "...and central parts of the United States and wintering..." to "...and central parts of the United States, and wintering..."
 * Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:16, 27 November 2015 (UTC)


 * In the lead, change " 'least concern' " to " 'Least Concern' "
 * Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:16, 27 November 2015 (UTC)


 * In the Description section, change "centres" to "centers"
 * Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:16, 27 November 2015 (UTC)


 * In the Taxonomy section, who is "E. Choate"?
 * Explained. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:16, 27 November 2015 (UTC)


 * In the Taxonomy section, change "To the Cajuns of South Louisiana this bird was..." to "To the Cajuns of South Louisiana, this bird was..."
 * Removed, wrong species! Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:16, 27 November 2015 (UTC)


 * In the Distribution and habitat section, wikilink "brackish"
 * Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:16, 27 November 2015 (UTC)


 * In the Behavior section, change "...to form wing-like extensions that nearly meet across its back and which resemble a ruff" to "...to form wing-like extensions that nearly meets across its back, resembling a ruff"
 * Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:16, 27 November 2015 (UTC)


 * In the Behavior section, change "...with head retracted and a gliding gait" to "...with its head retracted and a gliding gait"
 * Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:16, 27 November 2015 (UTC)


 * In the Behavior section, change "...averaging 49 by 37 mm (1.93 by 1.46 in)" to "...averaging 49 by 37 mm (1.93 by 1.46 in) in (diameter/radius)"
 * Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:16, 27 November 2015 (UTC)


 * In the Behavior section, change "...and receiving regurgitated food direct into its beak" to "...and receiving regurgitated food directly into its beak"
 * Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:16, 27 November 2015 (UTC)


 * In the Status section, change " 'least concern' " to " 'Least Concern' "
 * Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:16, 27 November 2015 (UTC)