Talk:American transportation in the Siegfried Line campaign/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 00:14, 13 September 2021 (UTC)


 * "US forces were to supported over the Omaha and Utah Beaches" - missing a word?
 * ✅ Added missing word. Hawkeye7   (discuss)  07:12, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "but the Quai Homet was not yet ready to receive them" - can this be glossed? My work assumption is that this is a specific named dock or quay.
 * ✅ Yes. Changed to Jetée du Homet to match the map. Hawkeye7   (discuss)  07:12, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Why did Clay have such a short term in command of Normandy Base Section
 * ✅ Too valuable. Changed to "temporary loan" to emphasis its short-term nature. Hawkeye7   (discuss)  07:12, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Recommend consistency of Bailey bridge vs bailey bridge
 * ✅ Capitalised. Hawkeye7   (discuss)  07:12, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Gloss/link POL on first usage, as it's not the most familiar acronym
 * ✅ Glossed. Hawkeye7   (discuss)  07:12, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Sourcing and images all look fine.

Good work on a longer article. Placing on hold. Hog Farm Talk 04:08, 14 September 2021 (UTC)