Talk:Americana (1981 film)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: -- ThinkBlue   (Hit   BLUE)  19:32, 29 June 2010 (UTC)

-- ThinkBlue   (Hit   BLUE)  19:32, 29 June 2010 (UTC)

A couple points that also need to be addressed: I was going to post these comments to the talk page, but noticed that the article was already under GA review. Hope you don't mind me crashing the party, ThinkBlue. :) These points should help the article better fulfill the criteria. María ( habla  con migo ) 19:49, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Extra comments from Maria
 * Carradine's book, Endless Highway, is used as a source numerous times but page numbers should be listed per WP:CITE. Listing the entire book, which is over 600 pages (!) long, does not help verify the cited info.  Use shorthand cites to include each individual page number.
 * Several of the citations (refs 2, 3 and 4) do not list access/retrieval dates.
 * Not at all, the more the merrier. -- ThinkBlue   (Hit   BLUE)  19:56, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
 * So much for my guarentee.. I'll work on it. I really do not know how to do shorthand cites. Will that keep it from passing?--Ishtar456 (talk) 21:55, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Everything is done except the citation. Besides the books length, it also has no index, so this will take a little while.--Ishtar456 (talk) 21:59, 29 June 2010 (UTC)

Everything is done, including the citations. I had to take out the line about Drury, Kansas being the center of the country, because I cannot find the page it is on. But, I added a quote, in the reception and criticism section about the films reception at the Film Festival in Utah. Now I can focus on the review on I Do Do. BelovedFreak has offered to help me with my first review. Take Care.--Ishtar456 (talk) 03:48, 30 June 2010 (UTC)
 * It seems as though you got Maria's concerns, which is excellent, but I just have one query left. -- ThinkBlue   (Hit   BLUE)  16:14, 30 June 2010 (UTC)
 * yeah, I like they way it is now. I'm sorry, I thought I did that.  It is done now.--Ishtar456 (talk) 16:24, 30 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Thank you to Maria for adding her input here, most appreciated, and thank you to Ishtar for getting the stuff I left at the talk page, because I have gone off and placed the article as GA. Congrats. ;) If you feel that this review is in error, feel free to take it to a GA review. -- ThinkBlue   (Hit   BLUE)  16:30, 30 June 2010 (UTC)

Thanks to both of you, and to Fuhghettaboutit for expensive assistance. It was more painful than I thought it would be, but worth it.--Ishtar456 (talk) 16:50, 30 June 2010 (UTC)
 * You think this was painful? Ha!  It only took one day, and you only had a few things to fix! :)  Job well done regardless; like a lot of things, it will be easier next time. María ( habla  con migo ) 17:27, 30 June 2010 (UTC)