Talk:Amir Sjarifuddin/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ganesha811 (talk · contribs) 13:28, 15 April 2022 (UTC)

Hi! I'll be reviewing this article, using the template below. Thanks for your patience in waiting for someone to pick this up! Ganesha811 (talk) 13:28, 15 April 2022 (UTC)


 * I just noticed you haven't edited in a week or so. Are you available to respond to comments on this GA, or would it be helpful to put it on hold for a little while? Either way is fine - just let me know! Ganesha811 (talk) 18:16, 19 April 2022 (UTC)
 * as it's been another week and there has been no response, I intend to close this review tomorrow without prejudice. If you re-nominate it, feel free to ping me and I'll see if I can pick it up for a new review. In the meantime, my comments below would provide a starting point for improvements. Ganesha811 (talk) 16:49, 26 April 2022 (UTC)
 * I'm going to fail this GA review without prejudice due to nominator non-response. As I mentioned, I'd be happy to see a re-nomination in the future. Feel free to ask any questions about this on my talk page. Ganesha811 (talk) 14:43, 27 April 2022 (UTC)


 * No, Amir isn't his family name. It's his first name. Actually he has family name "Harahap" but because he's part of The 1928 Youth Pledge, he didn't use his family name anymore to support nationalism spirit. Since his family name indicates ethnicity. Harahap itself is a family name from Batak ethnic group. Amir also had peerage "Sutan Gunung Soaloon" but he didn't use it too. 202.80.217.97 (talk) 10:24, 17 July 2023 (UTC)


 * Comment Understanding that he was prime minister for six months, shouldn’t there be more information regarding his premiership? At the moment, his prime minister section is 2 paragraphs of background, 1 sentence on his appointment, 1 sentence on his actual tenure, and 1 sentence on his fall. There is also a lack of explanation on why he has 2 cabinets - a reshuffle I would assume, but it is not mentioned in the article. Juxlos (talk) 16:51, 18 April 2022 (UTC)


 * Comment 1a and 2a now fixed Davidelit (Talk) 07:37, 14 August 2022 (UTC)