Talk:Amor Prohibido/GA3

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 19:29, 20 August 2016 (UTC)

Hi there! I'm Cartoon network freak and my review for your GAN is going to arrive soon Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:29, 20 August 2016 (UTC)

Lead

 * relationships, its lyrics → relationships; its lyrics


 * peaked atop the Billboard Hot Latin Songs chart → How can an album peak on a singles chart


 * US number one singles → number one singles in America
 * It was number one in the US not Canada, South and Central America.


 * The titular single "Amor Prohibido" → romove "the titular single", as you've mention this thing above already


 * US Latin → Latin American
 * I believe you're talking about the Hot Latin Songs Year-End link, the term Latin American consist of countries including South and Central America. The chart is only monitored in the US.


 * record it → record which it


 * the US → that territory
 * Which occasion?


 * acclaim, it is → acclaim, with it being


 * for the Best Mexican → remove "the"


 * Grammy Awards, it won → make two sentences here


 * boutiques, her death increased sales → boutiques, which resulted increased sales


 * Amor Prohibido reentered the → The record as well reentered the


 * and was certified gold by → and gaining a Gold certification accorded by
 * The RIAA is an authoritative source (official organization), so if a record is gold it's not according to them it is gold by their standards.


 * (RIAA); a signification of 500,000 shipped units → (RIAA)—a signification of 500,000 shipped units


 * It was certified platinum within three weeks, and in February 2010 the RIAA re-certified the album double diamond for shipments of two million copies in the US. → Within the next three weeks, it went on being certified Platinum, with it finally being re-certified by the RIAA double Diamond in February 2011 for exceeding shipments of two million copies.


 * It is tied → The album is tied


 * all-time → all time


 * by Billboard → by the Billboard
 * "The" is redundant


 * magazine and nominated it among its list of the top 100 albums of all-time → magazine, with them listing it under their list of the top 100 best albums ever recorded.
 * If I use that, I'll be explicitly implying Billboard twice them and their, I can just say nominated it among its list.


 * Thanks for your review! I have fixed some of your concerns. – jona  ✉ 12:11, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Full GANR going to arrive by tomorrow or Sunday. Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 06:19, 26 August 2016 (UTC)

Production and development

 * work had begun on Amor Prohibido → sounds weird; try to say that Selena begun working on the album with her team
 * after; taking → after—´taking
 * Quintanilla, found → remove comma
 * career launching → career-laughing
 * said in a → expressed in a
 * that was experimental → that adopted the experimental genre
 * as we parted → as he parted
 * pre-arrange and sequenced → pre-arrange, with them sequencing
 * to actually record → remove "actually"

Track listing

 * Make sure you add here "Credits adapted from the liner notes of Amor Prohibido." accompanyied by the AV notes.
 * 2002 re-release → 2002 re-release bonus tracks

Credits and personnel

 * Credits are taken from the album's liner notes. → Credits adapted from the liner notes of Amor Prohibido.
 * Performance credits → Vocal credits
 * Technical and production → Technical and production credits

Charts

 * flawless

Certifications

 * Don't let the space blanked for Mexico, add a None there (Unlocked)

Outcome
Although I have not reviewed the sections remained, I have took a look at them and realized that they're in fact mostly flawless; I mean if you want the article to be FL you can ask me to review them, but there are nothing more than some minor adding-comma issues like in the other sections. While solving my comments above, I put this on hold for seven days. Please ping me when your're ready. Best and good luck, Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:28, 26 August 2016 (UTC)
 * I have fixed all issues, I didn't add the "n/a" part since it is not a field over at Template:Certification Table Top, so instead I renamed it to "certifications and sales". Thanks – jona  ✉ 20:04, 26 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Passing Congrats, Cartoon network freak (talk) 21:22, 26 August 2016 (UTC)