Talk:An Assisted Elopement (1910 film)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: DepressedPer (talk · contribs) 08:32, 2 June 2015 (UTC)

I'll take a look into this one.

Here's what I found:


 * The film being lost is mentioned a second time in the Plot section; remove it and rewrite the first sentence as: "The Moving Picture World synopsis states:".
 * "The New York Dramatic Mirror review was positive despite having been a story already been done by another studio outside of the Edison Trust." Remove the second 'been'.
 * The Thanhouser refs should have the following: work=Thanhouser Films: An Encyclopedia and History.
 * The Newspapers.com refs should mention they come from that website and is open access.

This will be put on hold for you to handle the problems. DepressedPer (talk) 23:11, 2 June 2015 (UTC)
 * - Thanks for the ping, fixes done. Not sure why the bot removes the notices and not others so quickly. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 17:23, 14 June 2015 (UTC)
 * Consider this a GA. DepressedPer (talk) 17:33, 14 June 2015 (UTC)