Talk:An Elephant Makes Love to a Pig/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: C T J F 8 3  chat 08:57, 12 December 2009 (UTC)


 * Per WP:NFCC remove at least one, if not both pictures ie 3 and 8
 * Dropped one. —  Hunter  Kahn  ( c )  22:21, 12 December 2009 (UTC)
 * "and steals a blood sample from Stan and the boys flee" are they hastily fleeing due to Mephisto stealing stand blood, or does the word need to be changed to leave?
 * Ok. —  Hunter  Kahn  ( c )  14:42, 12 December 2009 (UTC)
 * You said Ok, but it still is the same? C T J F 8 3  chat 20:00, 12 December 2009 (UTC)
 * My mistake! Fixed. It should just be "leave". —  Hunter  Kahn  ( c )  22:21, 12 December 2009 (UTC)
 * source for the original title? I guess it looks like you guys are putting one reference at the end of each paragraph for the whole thing? Is this standard, I've never seen it.
 * That's right, if it pertains to all the information in that paragraph, I use one citation at the end of the paragraph to encompass it all. I'm pretty sure this is correct according to WP:FOOTNOTE ("Material may be referenced mid-sentence or at the end of a sentence or paragraph, as needed for clarity."), and this is how I've handled citations in pretty much all of my GAs and FAs and it's worked out fine. That's what I did in this case. However, I found a fairly new book source with this info, so I added that citation instead. —  Hunter  Kahn  ( c )  14:42, 12 December 2009 (UTC)
 * I know I personally have a problem doing this, but can you try and copyedit the 2nd paragraph of the cultural references section, so it reads less like a list of facts in paragraph form, and flows better. The 1st paragraph flows together very nicely
 * I took a crack at this. —  Hunter  Kahn  ( c )  14:42, 12 December 2009 (UTC)
 * Reference 4, can you try and find a different source, preferably from Comedy Central. If Comedy Central doesn't have anything, ref 5 will be sufficient
 * I replaced it with a newspaper article, which is probably a better independent, secondary source. —  Hunter  Kahn  ( c )  14:42, 12 December 2009 (UTC)
 * Can you see if you can use Google News (or any other source) and try and find the ratings for the episode, ie. how many people viewed it.
 * Believe me, I've looked all over Lexis Nexis and have not been successful. In the season one, ratings info is hit or miss; in bringing these articles up to FA and GA, I've found some for some episodes and found nada for others. :( —  Hunter  Kahn  ( c )  14:42, 12 December 2009 (UTC)

C T J F 8 3 chat 09:46, 12 December 2009 (UTC)
 * Note: Just so you know, I added just a tiny bit new info, and I moved the Home Release section below Reception, which is based on feedback we've gotten at previous GANs. Sorry I forgot to do this before. You can see my changes here. Thanks! —  Hunter  Kahn  ( c )  14:59, 12 December 2009 (UTC)
 * Looks good, passing the GA! C T J F 8 3  chat 06:18, 13 December 2009 (UTC)