Talk:An Excess Male

Feedback from New Page Review process
I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: This article's plot summary may be too long or excessively detailed..

–– FormalDude   talk   03:32, 1 September 2022 (UTC)


 * Thank you. I cut it down to two paragraphs and tried to remove as many unnecessary details as possible; the book is very complicated and many of the details are necessary to understanding the plot, but things like backgrounds of minor characters were not, so I cut down on as much of it as seemed trivial or non-important. PetSematary182 (talk) 04:29, 1 September 2022 (UTC)