Talk:Ana Carolina (director)

I could not find a source that said she was born 27 September. AzaAyla (talk) 05:25, 22 January 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review
Great start to an article! That being said, I would suggest some revision is necessary. Although informing, the headings in which are used such as “Carolina’s take on her work” or “Impact” stray from the more traditional headings used for Wikipedia.

In addition, some of your sentences could use some rephrasing as the language used is a bit too colloquial for Wikipedia style. For example, “...Carolina had much to say in regards to the to the censorship she faced in her time making films in Brazil.” There are sentences like these that need some added clarity or cite a quote for this.

Overall, it is a well researched and informative article that just needs a few edits on rephrasing, good job! Dufferoo (talk) 18:59, 5 March 2018 (UTC)