Talk:Ancient Stadium at Olympia

-You have a good start, but I think you need to beef up the sections or combine some. -You need an introduction -I think seating capacity could be included under features instead of having its own section. -The second sentence in seating capacity is all opinion, wikipedia is meant to be an unbiased source with only facts, not opinions. -in physical features, the starting line wasn't a painted white line, it was a line of stone block where you would line up your feet. (Here's a close up image, so you can see it better: https://www.ancient.eu/image/428/ This is a copyrighted image though so you can't use it in the actual article.) -The "winning the games" section also has a lot of opinion without sources to back them up. -I think the section on the priestess of Demeter could be included in demographics without its own section. -In Historical context, you don't have a space between the third and fourth sentences. -You can definitely expand on each of the sections as well. Add more about the structure and architecture. Kaylauer520 (talk) 05:24, 27 November 2017 (UTC)

Comments from Prof. Paga
Hi Maicoll - this is a good start to your article! Kathleen's suggestions are all excellent and I highly encourage you to address them all. In addition, here are a few comments of my own. Jpaga (talk) 18:51, 1 December 2017 (UTC)
 * Consider adding a map of Greece that shows where Olympia is, or a plan of Olympia that shows where the stadium is located.
 * The first sentence is inaccurate -- the stadium is a thing not an event (the event is called the stadion - consider hyperlinking to the preexisting article on this).
 * As Kathleen mentioned, you need to strike an impartial encyclopedic tone throughout, rather than using conjecture and assumptions. Integrating more citations to scholarly work (not just other Wikipedia articles) will help with this.
 * Consider moving the section on the physical description up to the top (and relabel it "Description").
 * Separate the article into a lead (introductory) paragraph, then subsequent sections. This will give your article greater clarity.