Talk:Ancient Trader/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 00:39, 5 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * Ancient Trader is a turn-based strategy video game developed by Slovakian video game studio 4Kids Games. → Sounds a bit odd to say "video game" twice in the same sentence.
 * "and Xbox 360" → "and the Xbox 360"
 * "one-year" → "year long"
 * "six people" → "six individuals"
 * "common board games" → A bit vague. What kind of board games?


 * Gameplay
 * Everything looks good here.


 * Development
 * "He worked with artist Petr Vcelka to design" → His name and title is already mentioned earlier, no need to do it again.
 * "Vcelka was "obviously" took" → "Vcelka "obviously" took"


 * Reception
 * "Ancient Trader received positive responses from several video game journalists upon release." → "Ancient Trader received positive responses from several video game journalists upon its release."
 * "Most critics gave praise to the game's art design and gameplay but criticized the lack of key elements such as a saving feature and scoreboards." → "Most critics praised the game's art design and gameplay, but criticized the lack of key elements such as a saving feature and scoreboards."


 * References
 * Everything looks good here.


 * ✅ Thanks!  → Call me  Hahc  21  00:57, 5 April 2014 (UTC)
 * All of the issues have been addressed to my satisfaction. We're good to go! Promoted to GA status! Congratulations! — Status  ( talk  ·  contribs ) 01:01, 5 April 2014 (UTC)