Talk:Andjar Asmara/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 17:04, 28 August 2012 (UTC)

Great stuff; perhaps even FA worthy. I'll put this on hold for now, for the minors to be addressed. TBrandley 01:20, 2 September 2012 (UTC)
 * Early life and theatre: "he is recorded as establishing the magazine Doenia Film". Huh? Reads funny.
 * Changed.
 * Early life and theatre: Link India
 * Not done, per WP:OVERLINKING, specifically "Avoid linking the names of major geographic features and locations,"
 * Legacy: "dramas" could please you clarify?
 * Dramas --> stage plays
 * References: Use actual sub-sections for Footnotes and Bibliography, as per MOS:ACCESS
 * Got that already
 * Wow, that was quick. Alright, looks good now. Pass. Well done! TBrandley 01:26, 2 September 2012 (UTC)
 * Might as well finish it before work, hehe. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:31, 2 September 2012 (UTC)