Talk:Andorra in the Eurovision Song Contest/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 11:39, 27 March 2021 (UTC)

I will review this today --K. Peake 11:39, 27 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Shouldn't you use semi-final instead of sf in the infobox to be specific?
 * "and participating every year" → "and participating every year thereafter"
 * "with RTVA citing" → "with the national broadcaster Ràdio i Televisió d'Andorra (RTVA) citing" with the wikilink
 * "and as of 2021 the country has yet to" → "and the country has since yet to" per the body not directly mentioning this being in 2021
 * "and recent statements from" → "while recent statements from"
 * "Ràdio i Televisió d'Andorra (RTVA), the national broadcaster of Andorra, has used" → "RTVA has used"
 * Pipe the years to the appropriate Eurovision wikis
 * "small population on occasion" → "small population, on occasion"

Contest history

 * "to raise the profile of the country" → "to raise their profile"
 * "and with an assurance that" → "and an assurance that"
 * "in the contest for" → "in the Eurovision Song Contest for"
 * Img looks good!
 * The viewers and an assembled jury being those who selected the entry is not sourced
 * Pipe grand final to Eurovision Song Contest 2004
 * Pipe final to Eurovision Song Contest 2005
 * Are you sure the source actually confirms the nation coming last in the contest?
 * "to the final." → "to the final in either of the contests."
 * "on their sixth appearance Andorra" → "on their sixth appearance, Andorra"
 * Img looks good!
 * Are you sure the part about how leaving would prevent further participation is sourced?
 * "In recent years renewed" → "In recent years, renewed"
 * "and past Andorran Eurovision artists have" → "with past Andorran Eurovision artists having"
 * "the nation's last participant," → "Andorra's last participant,"
 * "to enable Andorra to" → "for enabling Andorra to"

Selection process

 * "in the national final." → "in the Eurovision Song Contest 2004."
 * [38] does not mention the 2006 to 2008 selections

Voting

 * "where Andorra participated in the contest" → "where Andorra participated,"
 * "However each country was" → "However, each country was"
 * Wikilink SMS
 * The parts about the nation having a small population and back-up jury results being used on occasion are not sourced
 * "when the votes of the country's" → "when the votes of Andorra's"
 * "in the semi-final and final." → "in both the semi-final and final."

Contestants

 * Good

Heads of delegation

 * Year → Year(s)

Commentators and spokespersons

 * Img looks good!
 * Remove wikilink on Andorra Televisió
 * "have provided comment on" → "have provided commentary for"
 * Table looks good!

Gallery

 * Neat additions and they all look good!

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 21:47, 27 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the quick review again! I believe I have covered all the points above. I have added a few more refs to cover some of the gaps you mentioned, please do shout if you have any further questions or queries on the new info. Sims2aholic8 (talk) 22:44, 27 March 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, looks good! --K. Peake 08:30, 28 March 2021 (UTC)