Talk:Andrés Torres (baseball)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Basilisk4u (talk · contribs) 21:48, 26 May 2014 (UTC)

Torres is the best!! Wish he was still a Giant, but alas, I will review this article in his honor. Basilisk4u (talk) 21:48, 26 May 2014 (UTC)

Review

Lead

 * "Torres made it back to the majors in 2009" I think "returned to the majors" sounds more encyclopedic.
 * Considering how many articles mention Torres' speed, I think it would be important to mention that he is known for his speed in the lead, possibly at the end of the first paragraph

Career

 * "but he did steal several bases" - A more specific number of bases stolen would be nice, but it's okay if you can't find it
 * In the 2004 Detroit Tigers section "He only appeared in three games (and didn't even have a plate appearance)", the part in parenthesis should be changed to "(with no plate appearances)"
 * In "2010" perhaps explain the significance of the Willie Mac Award
 * In the 2012 Mets section, what do you mean by "He was activated on April 30" in relation to the DL? If it means taken off the disabled list I think it should be "reactivated", but alas I am not an expert on disabled list terminology.

Personal life

 * Any more recent information about Gigante? The source about the film is from May 2012 and describes the film as being "near completion".

There's my review! Overall a very good article, not much I could find to complain about. Putting this on hold for my suggestions to be addressed. Cheers! Basilisk4u (talk) 00:36, 31 May 2014 (UTC)