Talk:Andrew Hull Foote

NPOV and other recommended improvements
Here are some tips to get this up to B-class. I spend most of my time on wiki making and improving military biographies, so I hope you find this helpful. ''No mention of Foote can be complete without reference to his strong adherence to Protestant Christianity. ... which he prosecuted with noted vigor.''
 * The introduction needs to be sorted out. It's only a short article so the intro should really only be one or two paragraphs.
 * This paragraph needs a NPOV:
 * The rest is good enough for B-class in my opinion.

Hope this helps. Gaia Octavia Agrippa Talk |Sign 13:43, 13 March 2010 (UTC)